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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
I really like how well you stuck to canon on this. All of the characters, Vernon, Dudley, Petunia, and Harry are all very well in character and not overly-so. It was a nice look into a moment in their lives that wasn't written by J.K.R. and really held all of the elements that she always mentions when talking about their relationship. I like the little hints towards accidental magic that always makes Vernon mad. I think you did a great job with the characters and the challenge. Dudley is a hard character to do, at least for me he is, so i give you props on that.

It all flowed really well together and I didn't see any mistakes at all during the piece. You had great description throughout the chapter especially when talking about the characterizations such as Petunia having horsey features, Vernons moustache twiching. You really did a good job with these characters. Great Job. and congrats on your first piece!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the lovely review! I tried to stick to canon so it's great to know I succeeded :') Thank you again!

- Megan xxx


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