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Review:fauxthefox says:
Hello again!

Once again, the mood you've set is really awesome. The first few paragraphs seem a bit redundant, though - I think that the chapter would work if you started with the password exchange, which would also add suspense.

I really like the idea of "honor between thieves." I guess I'm not supposed to have a solid idea of what the necklaces are for yet? But you've definitely made me curious.

I think I said this last time, but I'd really like to know more about Caradoc's background, and to see more of his thoughts and emotions as the story goes on.

Your canon characters are, again, very well-done. The flow and style is practically perfect. :)

9/10

Faux

Author's Response: Hm... I'll definitely look back at the start of the chapter when I edit it and my queue for the queue is empty, thanks for suggesting that!
Ah, the necklaces will turn up again - twice more, I think - so you'll find out later :P
Caradoc's background will turn up later, particularly when things get moving faster within the Order.

Thanks for your review, it was very helpful!
Aph xx


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