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Review:Gal22 says:
Hi so I just read your whole story in a couple a days and it is good :) some chapters are a bit too short and I feel like smetimes you need to describe things mre in detail by overall I think you are a really great writer and you did an amazng job with the story :) also, can you please give me a description of the characters or pictures of eople you would imagine playing them
:) thank you!

Author's Response: ok so its rather difficult to describe the people as they are in my head but I will give it a go.

Rachael: medium hight, normal build maybe slightly over weight. Brown hair and eyes. She's quite witty but also rather socially inept when it comes to boys and what they think. She's quite clever and academic but not as far as Hermione.

Shia: she is just a little bit shorter than Rachael and has like a blue blonde hair colour and green eyes. She is rather out there and says what she thinks with little thought. She's also quite caring but in a round about way.

Fenna: She has mousey brown hair and brown eyes and well, she is quiet and rather thoughtful. She doesn't always understand why Rachael and Shia do things because she is more rational.

James: James is like a mini Harry. Minus the eyes and he has brown-ish hair. He has the temper and troubles of his mum and the social expectations that Harry had when he went to school. James has taken the extrovert parts of Ginny and Harry and also their talents on the the quiddtich pitch.

Richard: Well he is mild mannered and has mousey hair and blue eyes. He is very clever and does not boast about things. Also he doesn't really talk to his friends but he advices them.

Paul: he is the annoying tag along and was just generally accepted by James and the others. He isn't academic and tries really hard in school. He is rather plain and I haven't actually imagined his hair and eyes.

Sam: he is your quintessential annoying teen guy. He has dark messy curly windswept hair. He is all about bravado. Not nasty but sometimes miss guided. At heart Sam is a nice guy.

Leticia: Sheep. she follows Natalia around. She has butter scotch blonde hair and a sweet face. But she cannot think for herself.

Natalia: think mean girls and there you are. She is pure malice, well towards Rachael and really it started a long time ago and they should have given in by now. She has ice blonde hair and pale grey eyes. She is also sickeningly pretty.

I'm not sure if anyone will read this but here are a few little bits of extra information.
James, Sam, Rich and Paul, they are my version of the Marauders. Sam Blake, Rich Light, Paul Pauls...it's kind of obvious...their characters and their names...

Well thats about all I can do...thanks for the review I'm glad that you liked my story.


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