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Review:Gryffin_Duck says:
Only the prologue of this story is up and I already love it! I'm so glad that I found it. It has everything that I love in a story- next gen, werewolves, good grammar/spelling.

The plot of this is what originally caught my eye. I absolutely adore stories about werewolves (I've written a few, too), so when I find one that's done well I get excited. But not only have you written a story that involves werewolves, you've made it unique. The whole idea about Rose's sacrifice for her brother is very intriguing and I can't wait to read more about it. It reminds me of what Lily did for Harry, but different.

I also really like how you jumped right into the action. I immediately wanted to keep reading in order to find out what Rose and Hugo were after and what they were doing. Yet you managed to explain the back story at the same time, with the flashback. It fit nicely into the narration. I'm really curious as to what Malfoy is doing and why he's after Rose and Hugo.

I love this prologue and I cannot wait to read more. Great job! :)

Author's Response: Your review really made my day :) I'm glad you like it so far. This will be a very plot and character driven story and I hope to keep just as exciting as well. Interestingly enough, I really didn't consider Rose's sacrifice for Hugo in regards to Lily and Hugo but you make an excellent point...I think it is very much like that (except Rose didn't die). That is a very important driving force in the story, actually. And Malfoy...well, there's more to him than meets the eye for sure. Hopefully you'll like the upcoming chapters!
_Shez


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