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Review:macadamia says:
macadamianwonders here again.

I feel so sorry for Ron. I know I really shouldn't be laughing at his situation, but I can't help it. Left with three dead pigs? So funny. Maybe it's because it's Ron. I just think everything he does is funny. But really, you did a great job of portraying the action, his feelings, and just everything.

I thought the Gregors were great OCs. I don't know why, but I just seem to find everything funny. I imagine Mr Gregor being a large old man with a funny moustache, which in itself is a terribly funny mental picture (for me at least). Laura seems like such an angry person. I think it would be great fun to see her annoyed. :) I wonder why, or how, Ron even met her.
The Gregors actually kind of remind me of the Dursleys. One child, brat-like. And they're trying so hard to be normal, forcing the baby onto Ron because they don't want it. Maybe Laura won't want to give up the baby later? Then they'll have to come back into the story. I guess I can always hope for that.

Just some things I noticed:
-Hermionie
You spelt it with an extra i after the n. Both times.

-...would of hired one Robert!
-... my arrival, it couldnít of I ...
Here you wrote would of instead of would have
and couldn't of instead of couldn't have

Anyway, fantastic chapter! Good job.

Author's Response: Thanks for this! I missed those errors! I'm glad you saw the conection, I didn't realise myself until it had been validated!
THanks for the great review :)


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