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Review:Debra20 says:
Marina I cannot express to you how I loved this beginning. Or better said, ending? This story has so much potential that I can hardly wait to read on, and discover the secrets that lie buried beneath a life that has surely not been an easy one.

I am very intrigued as to why did you chose precisely Andromeda as a character. I'm also terribly curious to find out if Gideon is an original character or if he is the only Gideon we know in the series, Molly's brother. He too died around 1981, so that could be a hint.

It's really fascinating that you embarked yourself into such a journey. Writing a story in reverse chronology must not be easy to do. I imagine it requires detailed planning, so you can know exactly when something has to happen. I really commend you for this idea!

The writing in itself is very very beautiful. The way you chose your words helps express the character's feelings incredibly well. You can feel her suffering, her denial to accept the fact that he is dead. Your quill delivers great imagery, from the surrounding portrayal, to Andromeda's thoughts and emotions. I can't wait to read on!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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