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Review:halfbreed says:
Intriguing.

I love the way you've set everything up here; your transitions from past to present flow very nicely. I think all your indirect characterization reveals excellent writing skills, and you've got the makings of a fantastic plot to boot.

I'm not sure if you'll go into the past from here or continue on this track; and I have to say, I wouldn't mind either! I think any direction you go with this is bound to be superb, and I look forward to reading more. You can definitely draw a reader in; I'll be anxiously awaiting the next update.

Thanks for the surprising and interesting read (:

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