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Review:Atomic says:
Hi there, it's Atomic from the forums responding to your review request!!

So, I think you definitely have a very unique plot here. And while I think Ron might be a little young for the story, it definitely still fits in very well. You've done a great job keeping things cannon (except the spelling of Azkaban, but no big) but the characterization and everything is all very good! I would just recommend a beta to take care of some minor grammar/spelling issues. But otherwise, I think you're doing a grand job! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thankyou!
I knew I spelt Azkaban wrong, but couldn't remember how to spell it for the life of me! :P

I'll be going into more details in the next few chapters which would hopefully make Ron's age seem more possible.
Thanks for the review :)


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