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Review:honoraryweasley says:
So upon seeing the name of this chapter, I began giggling in that giddy way, so I began reading, and as I did so, the giddy giggling turned into loud laughing (all this alliteration is unintended, I promise), and then into all-out snorting. The embarrassing kind.

This was so entertaining. The third person was a really great choice, because it wasn't even really third person because you get all of Miranda's thoughts. "Head Person" sent me into a bit of a spaz attack.

Oh but one thing - catsup = ketchup. In these Britishy parts. :D

Author's Response: Giddy giggling progressing to loud laughing and then silly snorting? You don't say! (I like alliteration but I'm really bad at it.) And embarrassing to boot? ^___^ The third person is there mostly because Miranda's voice isn't the only one we'll be hearing through the story -- trust me, everyone's got the potential to be a little bit cracky and hopefully they won't disappoint. And huh, I figured ketchup was too pedestrian a term for Britishy parts, but I shall rectify immediately. And thank you, of course, for such a lovely review.

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