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Review:enchantedx says:
*sighs* the typical "James an arrogant git" and "For the million times, I won't go out with you!" xD
You're right this was a filler but it was still a good one 8)
I'm jealous that your good at writing dialogues. I can't do them for the life of Merlin..xD
Though, I have a tips...you seem to write the word "yelling" a lot. I know they're actually yelling at each other, but maybe use some different words in that case? Because it seems like the whole chapter is yelling at James and Lily xD

I still like it though!

Author's Response: Yeah, this was my first story EVER. Hahaha, I've learned recently that there are in fact other words that mean the same thing that I can use! I'm doing that right now actually! I try my very best to change it up!

You think I'm good! Thank you :P I always thought I was horrible. It takes me FOREVER to think up stuff to write, and after I write it I still think it looks bad :( But you saying that just made my day! Thank you! Thanks for the tips! I will defititely be using that one!

WhatAboutRegulus


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