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Review:enchantedx says:
You did good in this chapter and I liked to see their childish sides xD Poor James, Lily won't give them a chance.

You know, I actually got some ideas for your story! You could write a prologue in recent time, like let's say in their 4th year where Lily furiously write a journal entry for something stupid James did.
Then it'll be like "He didn't used to be like that..." and write about their meeting in the park. This could be a chapter. And then change it back to 4th year again, where everything happens, and then James do something stupid again, and we could read one of her journal entries for her 3th year. And then switch back to 4th year. She doesn't have to write that much in her journal, just when James really did something stupid! And then she think about something nice that he used to do, and write about it. What do you think?

Author's Response: Ahaha I know. Don't forget, they are children ahaha 11 years old baby!

That is a good idea! I'll keep it in consideration, but you know. You could write it too ;) Try it out! It's a brilliant idea and I don't want to keep credit for that :P

Nice to see you here again ;) Thanks for the review!


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