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Review:enchantedx says:
Wow. They're only 11, and Mary is already talking about boys :O
I liked the Snape- Lily friendship, first I thought Snape was kind of out of character but after just a second he was back to normal so you did a really good job on that one.

So tell me, is this Mary; Mary Mcdonald? I think there was a character in that name in J/L's years. Maybe i'm wrong.

It's always hard to describe Hogwarts, but you managed anyway, lucky xD



Haha, i'm deffinetley one of those who always hands in stuff in the last minute! Actually, I have an English eassy to write til tomorrow that I haven't started with yet. But it's a really easy one(I just have to write a little bit about myself, what I did this summer and why I choose English. 100-200words.) I'm taking an English course and this one is mostly about reading books, analyze, discussing and things like that. I actually look forward to it- not the talking part though because I sound awful talking in English(Have only really got to practice it this year when I visited Paris for 3days) and the rest time was in a classroom. I don't really have English people to talk with, just online friends and I only chat with those xD

Gah, i'm writing too much, better to stop..xDD
You don't happen to have aim or msn? or tda? 8) my tda account is the same as in this site^^ (enchantedx)

Author's Response: Oh yeah, I've always imagined Mary kind of boy crazy ever since the beginning. You know, you have one of those not so into all boy's friends and then the one who comment's on every single one. At least I do. :P hahaha, it's fun to write it! Yes it is that Mary :) what other Mary would it be!

Yeah, I want to include Severus because, after all, he was one of her best friends until fifth year. So he is important in the story!

Yeah, Hogwarts was wicked hard for me to discribe :/ I'm not all good with descriptions so thank you! I'm glad I managed!

Oh! You better start that! I usually write my stuff at 11 PM nighttime :P Then hand it in. I usually babble on it to, make sarcastic remarks. My teacher loves it :) But my thesis are always atrocious and so is my spelling!

You got to go to paris! Man you are so lucky! I want to go their so badly! That course sounds wicked fun though ;) You're wicked lucky you get to do that! So you practice english by talking to people online? Hahaha, makes sense I think :P

Yeah, I have an account at tda, it's flippensweet48. I also have one at the forums, I think I'm already friends with you! I can talk to you more there!

Thanks for the review ;) Glad you like the story so far!

WhatAboutRegulus


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