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Review:Kat says:
i thought it was lovely but a bit..Im not sure what the word is. finished quickly? but maybe that was your intention - to make the story finish quickly to mirror Fleur's feelings? if not, I would have maybe focused on the moment she saw Bill talk to his dad, how he looked,what he was wearing, his smile and so on as picking him from everyone else at the party would have shown the love ;) i might have also added a memory or two with fleur and bill just to show how the love grew. but other than that i though it was great and Fleur's characterisation done well

Author's Response: I wrote this at least a year ago and at the time, I wrote much shorter fanfictions than I do now so that's why this is rather short and why it finishes so suddenly. Thank you for your ideas, I'll definitely take them into account :) Thank you!

x Ely

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