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Review:Erised says:
Hi! This is Erised with your review.

I really enjoyed this! I thought that it was a great, filled with suspense opening that really grabs the reader's attention. You've created mystery and tension really effectively, and it leaves the reader wondering what's to come. An excellent opening!

I loved how we don't know who 'L' is, and find out the premise of the story only at the end with the hard hitting last line. This was really well done and I completely wasn't expecting the last line to be that! Fab work.

Apologies for this review not being very long, but I don't really have any criticisms. Overall I think this is a great start and I'd love to see more. Please feel free to re-request in my thread :)

Author's Response: Thankyou very much :) It's my first fanfiction so I'm really grateful for these reviews!

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