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Review:Everlasting Faerie Light says:
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This is such a heartwarming one shot. It made me smile as I read it. I love ScoRose to death, and this fic just reminds me why I love it. It's written beautifully and the text is so smooth. It's almost poetic, the way you wrote it. I could basically picture them in the rain and I could also feel the romantic tension between Rose and Scorpius. Their kiss was adorably sweet, not sappy like a lot of romantic scenes. It was written just right.
Another thing I'd like to point out is how you complimented the story with the way you ended it. I love the whole "when did I break you?" part. It adds a flare to your already beautifully written fic.
Again, well done. You're characterization is great, your writing style is beautiful, and it was just adorable enough without becoming sappy.

P.S. Isn't it blast ended skrewts?

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your thoughts. I'm really happy it didn't come off overly sappy. While it is in essence a very fluffy, heartwarming story, I wanted the deeper feelings of Rose to come through rather than making it a gush fest.

I've had this story beta read now to correct my errors, I just got impatient waiting for validation so I decided to ask for a review anyway :)

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