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Review:Atomic says:
Hello again! It's Atomic with your requested review!

I think you've got a great plot going on here, the idea of everything being backwards is very intriguing. However, it's also a lot to take in at once. So, I'm not going to lie. I'm ridiculously confused. Everything is really, really backwards, and apparently Hermione is supposed to be the one to fix it, but it's very confusing because I have no idea how it got this way or why. I think it might be best to put a chapter in between this one and the first sort of explaining the universe as it is right now. You don't have to tell us everything, but it's sort of hard to follow as is.

Your characterization is great though! We really only got to see Hermione and the founders, but I thought they were all done very well with very realistic dialogue. I'm really liking how you portray them. Even backwards Hermione is still very much herself, and I'm glad that it's her who remembers. I know our Hermione wouldn't let her mind become broken.

But yeah, you've got a really original and interesting plot going on. I really, really like it. It's just so different that it's hard to get a grasp on. But feel free to re-request when you write chapter three because I would love to know what's going on. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Hello ^_^ Welcome back :P

Plot? Nah I don';t got one of those ^_^ Yeah it's all planned out. :P Just gotta get the right words into chapter 3 :) I'm glad your confused ^_6 i know that sounds stupid but your supposed to be :P I'm a riddler ^_^ Sorry I know people hate being confused but as chapter 3 4 && 5 get put up everything will start piecing itself together :) x

:O Really? :/ I laways worry sooo much about characterization because I cannot follow Canon. :P Never, so Characterization for canon characters is really hard for me :/ x Founders where intriguing to write in my opinion :P I wanted them As Portraits instead of ghosts. I have them as Ghosts in another story so I wanted to Jazz things up a bit ^_^ x

Nawww your so sweet *inserts heart and hug here* Will definetly re-request later on ^_^ xx

Thank you for an amazing review :D x


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