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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
HATTIE I HAVE COME HITHER AGAIN.

:O

Such mystery! Such intrigue! I want to know more about them. Elodie must have rejected Scorpius's proposal, but why? And if they're not together, then why is she with him? Where is Draco? What exactly is wrong with Astoria? Have they tried going to Muggle hospitals? Are they too proud/prejudiced to do that?

Already I am wanting more. You're very good with the art of feeding us certain information very slowly, answering one question just enough to satisfy our curiosity while unraveling another one to keep us guessing.

And the descriptions. Wow. The floral scent, the dust, the age. How much Malfoy Manor changed in a year. I could see the mirror with dust and blood spittle vividly - and I'm very much wondering what Astoria was searching for in her jewelry box.

Gah! So lovely. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

♥

Author's Response: HELLO SARAH. I AM GLAD YOU HAVE ONCE AGAIN HITHERED.

READ ON, my pretty, and kinda-sorta-maybe-ish everything will be revealed! You'll discover all about what happened between Elodie and Scorpius, what their relationship is like now, and how it was before. She's a bit of a git and so is he. Draco's mystery will be uncovered later. Astoria's dying, so she'll be around for long.

Aaah, description. The bane of my existence. Too much? Too little? Too much backstory? Too little backstory? I'm glad you liked the newspaper article. I thought it would be the best way to relay the information. It was hard getting the tone right though.

TANK YA LUVLIH SAZ FO' ALL YO LUVLIH COMMENTS. U REALLEH IZ FABEROO. REALLEH. ♥

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