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Review:HarrietHopkirk says:
Oh ma gahhh... this story is so pretty! I love Dominique as a character and I love how different authors have different interpretations of her!

I really like what you have done with her here - she's delicate and beautiful, and I like her relationships with her siblings. It's perfectly natural for sibling relationships to dissolve when one of them goes away, saying that they'll write and keep in touch and stay close, and they return and everything is different. I think that Dominique going to Beauxbatons is a totally feasible idea - Fleur is opinionated (her fights with Molly, anyone?) and while at Hogwarts in GoF, she complained about the food and the cold. I'd like to think that she would have more happy sending her children back to Beauxbatons rather than Hogwarts.

There's something really elegant and pretty about this story: whether it's the fact Dominique is so French, whether it's the way she speaks or acts, whether it's the fact that lavender seems to make it somehow more floral and beautiful. I think it's lovely. Your writing style is pretty superb, and I love where this is going. Really, truly. It's gorgeous. ♥

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