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Review:Debo13 says:
Aw, what a great chapter. I can say now that you officially have me hooked!

First off, loved the way Harry proposed. You wrote it absolutely terrifically. To top it off, couldn't help but beam at Mrs. Weasley's reaction. Hopefully everything goes right for the young newlyweds!

Though this was obviously the main point and my favourite part of the chapter, I really liked the Quidditch game scene. One complaint though - you couldn't have had Canada score a few more points in the Quidditch game? We're terrible in everything else except hockey - I was hoping our Quidditch team could have held their own a bit more, but alas, it was not meant to be.

All joking aside, great chapter and story so far!

Author's Response: Haha, sorry about the Canada thing! In my defense, I didn't purposefully pick out Canada, I just picked a random team and used them for that position in the league. :P It could have been anyone else, call it bad luck haha. And I actually like Canada anyways, I'd love to go to Toronto one day! :)

Thanks for the great comments as always.

Rhys.


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