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Review:Debo13 says:
Really good chapter here.

Was happy to see you included Andromeda and Teddy in to the story. Nice touching moment with Harry giving Teddy his present. It will be interesting to see how much you include Teddy and his relationship with Harry in this story and in your subsequent sequels (assuming this due to your banner!)

Also really liked how you explained the Quidditch World Cup draw. We never really got an explanation on how it works, so I was glad to see you included that. A little more of the magical sport in your novel is a welcome addition!

Intrigued to see where the story is going! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Assume away! This story is actually completed, and I am uploading the chapters as fast as I can. I'm also five chapters in to book 2 so yeah, you can start thinking about how these characters will be used.

I'll say Teddy is more of a side-character in this one but will become more of a main character in future installments.

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