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Review:MidnightBlue_x says:
For starters, I think I should mention how you are steadily becoming one of my favourite authors here. Anyway, On to your review. Starting from what you've requested, you said you were unsure at the summary? I'd fix up the 'things are - slowly - improving' into something more like 'things are, slowly, improving' I think it gives it a little bit more a flow but you are the writer, this is only my opinion. And secondly to do with the summary, 'but the wounds will be hard to heal as one of them is dead' I would change it to 'but the wounds will be hard to heal with her eldest sister gone' or 'with Bellatrix gone' or something like that, again my opinion.

You then said you were worried about the characterisation of the young Blacks and their relationships- I think you were wonderful at writing them as young children and I actually believe that this was all a scene taken out of the books, if that makes sense? The last thing you wanted to know was about the starting of this chapter, I think that is was wonderful and it definitely sucked me in.

I hope this review was helpful and I can't wait for you to update.

Thank you for requesting.

x Ely

Author's Response: Aww, really? Thanks! *hugs*
Yeah, I kinda wrote it in a hurry and it sort of stuck as I couldn't think of anything better. I'll definitely think about incorporating some of your ideas into it - they'd probably work better!
Thanks so much for your wonderful comments - they made my day!

Aph xx

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