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Review:dobbyismyhero22 says:
AHHH. I HATE MADISON AND ELISE MORE THAN ANYTHING ELSE IN THE WHOLE ENTIRE WORLD!! HOW COULD THEY DO THAT! AHHH!!

deep breath.

holy crap. i'm flipping. i knew it was going to be something of that sort, and you did a great job with it. i love dom being vulnerable, it shows a new side to her. i feel terrible for her. poor dommy! and i liked the talk with james. i'm happy that he actually feels bad about what he did...because he definitely should feel bad! and didn't you say it was rose and AIDAN in the broom cupboard, not oliver? maybe i'm blanking, but i didn't think it said oliver. and obviously tyson's confused because he thought that scorpius like rose or something like that.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE TELL ME THAT YOU ARE UPDATING THIS VERY VERY SOON?! :D

Author's Response: I HATE THEM TOO! They're total cows and need to get a reality check, but sadly there are people like that in the world.

I'm happy you think I did a good job with ti! I was worried it'd come out a bit too dramatic and put people off but I'm happy that didn't happen!

Dom being vulnerable was fun for me to write. She definitely needed to show that she had doubts, because she will have a lot to face later on in the story.

The talk with James took me a while to write and actually like because I didn't want it to be forced. It's good he feels bad, but he has a lot of stuff to make up for before Coco would ever forgive him.

And yeah I made a bit of a slip up. I originally had Rose and Oliver in the broom cupboard when I wrote the chapter, but then I changed it to Aidan and I forgot XD. Sorry for the confusion. You might be right about Tyson though ;)

I'm thinking about updating this story again instead of my other one because I already have the next chapter written, but I'm not quite sure yet. I'll decide tomorrow which story I'm submitting.

Thank you for reviewing and being so amazing :)
-Rebecca


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