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Review:Lunnah says:
Hey there!!

Sorry this is taking me so long to get through...I'm back at school and I'm pretty much just fitting chapters in whenever I find time :-)

Anyway, I really loved this chapter! Astoria is such an interesting character because I sort of feel bad for her but at the same time she is so aggressive towards Harry and really invasive into his personal relationship with Ginny. I can really sense how out of control Harry feels like this is, as he wants to be a good person and help her but he's still so confused by what's happening. I'm sad for Ginny and I hope they are able to patch things up a bit. I was actually surprised by how up front Astoria was with Harry about her feelings after all this time!

Luna is crazy! I feel like she really should have asked Harry before she invited Astoria out with them! I can't wait to see what happens now that Draco is there! I think the way you've characterized him (at least from Astoria's descriptions) is really interesting and unusual for adult Draco. I like how he's scared of things and sort of acts like a deflated version of his former confident self. I can imagine Astoria feeling distant from him due to his job and behavior.

Can't wait to read more! I'll be back soon :-)

~Hannah

Author's Response: Heya you!

Merlin, no worries. Life is busy, hope school's going well! : D

I know. Astoria started out as this very seductive person, and she seemed to be quite annoying but then as I wrote her she's developed a reason why she's like that - and just what has prompted her to seek Harry out. Yes, poor Harry doesn't know what's happening and is a little freaked out by this! Ginny feels like Harry's slipping away from her, and hates this. The whole thing reminds me slightly of Teri and Will's relationship in Glee. Astoria idolises Harry and yes has loved him from school. She's a woman who tends to think with her heart instead of her head, and you'll see what happens with them in the end.

Luna really is crazy! I can see her acting like this though, completely throwing Harry into the deep end because she believes that what she's doing is really sweet and will be good for everyone. I know, what's gonna happen?!? You'll have to keep reading on! Thanks very much. Well, I know from what Rowling said that Draco is not a nice person and I know he wouldn't have changed his spots but I also think when it came to dark arts things, he would not want to be involved as his past usually suggested or nearly ended with him dying or his parents being threatened. I think the only way for him to get back into it again is if he was reassured that no harm would come to anyone he loved. Yes, there's a reason for her behaviour.

Thanks v much again!

Rachel

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