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Review:EnigmaticEyes16 says:
Sorry, I haven't been reviewing every chapter, but I have been loving them! I loved the animagus scene, and the fight scene with Sirius, and how she likes to chase things in her cat form. I think you managed to do all of that brilliantly, and really bring out her cat-like tendencies. I also like how she thinks of herself as separate from her animagus form, that's interesting and thought-provoking... I wonder when she's gonna realize it's all in her, no matter what form she's taken. I was kind of thrown off by your sudden inclusion of Snape though, this is the 15th chapter, and he's never been mentioned before now. But since he makes it known that he saw her anger, I'm guessing he does become more prominent in the story. I supppose the same goes for Snape as I said about Peter, he can't really be forgotten, but Nyx's mentioning of him was just so weird and out of the blue in my opinion. Oh well. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: That's quite alright! I don't think I'd have the time to respond to twenty-odd reviews! Haha, I love reading them. Yeah, I'm so gla dyou picked up on the it's all inside her sort of thing, it's something I'm probably going to explore more in the sequel. And about the Snape thing, I'd forgotten that was in there! Originally, I had two different stories essentially that branched out after this chapter with different plotlines. One was more about Nyx and her true self and then there was this one that focussed on the romance aspect which I decided to use because I wanted to make the sequel the darker story instead of changing the mood of this one. Does that make sense? I hope so, lol. I loved writing the animagus scenes I have to say! I used to struggle a lot with description so it was a great challenge for me! Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me! I'm looking forward to reading your other reviews! Alex :D

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