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Review:Singularity says:
This was really cute :) I like the way you wrote Rose. I thought you did well with the first person/present tense. Nothing really jumped out at me, so that's a good sign :)

I also liked that you wrote Rose and Scorpius as friends before they kissed. I think there is a tendency to write them as rivals who act like they can't stand one another, until they make out :P So this was kind of refreshing in that way.

For some reason, the fact that you included the blast-ended screwts absolutely cracked me up. Oh Hagrid...you're hopeless dude :)

My favorite line was: "This moment is nearly too perfect to ruin with common sense." I don't know why that struck me, but it really did. It's so sweet and funny and very much in the moment. I loved it.

Overall, it was an excellent, sweet, fluffy story and I really enjoyed reading it.

Cheers!
~Singularity

Author's Response: Thank you so much for you review. I'm glad I got most of the 1st person/present tense things right.

It is a sweet fluffy story. It is one of those spontaneous moments that can happen between friends who crave for something more but are a little afraid to say something.

I love that line too. I was writing the story and then I realised that Rose could so easily use her wand, but that would ruin the moment, so that line basically sums up why, even though she is a witch, she stood there cold and wet :)


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