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Review:Kitsune says:
First of all I really like this chapter and I will be reading the rest of this story.

However, this chapter was too rushed - you really need to go into more depth as it allows better character development. Although the style of writing is fine please don't skip months at a time, if you can help it - I like to know what happens.

That aside though this looks like a very interesting story (I love vampire stories) and I hope you continue writing.

Author's Response: Yes, I wrote this chapter many years ago when I was about 13? I'm now 21 and I do see the errors, rushed introduction and such. I'm considering going back and revising the story though I'm debating that I should probably finish it right out before going back. Thank you for the input though and for reading! :)

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