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Review:TheDoctor says:
Hello! Astoria Viana here (finally) and I just wann apolagize for the crazy long wait, but I hope this is still helpful.

Plot: Goodness! You've done it again! Well written and really intriguing. This is my first Audrey/Percy fic and i already love it! The mistery is developing well and your changes of perspective are smooth and each POV remains interesting to read. The little twist at the end of this chapter was brilliant! I'm curious if Harry has any suspicions of Williamson... anyway, poor Padma!... and Mr.Cain... is he dead?

While I can see the plot strands of both Inception and Harry Potter (of course) you definately have a unique and one of a kind spin on them.

Characterization: I love Audrey, she's got hufflepuff written all over her. The way you've written her as trying hard but occaionally slipping up (with Cain etc.) is lovely, especially with Williamson's little remark about her intelegence. Cain was also well done, I admit in many stories when it switches to a muggle POV it annoys me but you did realy well and I was thoroughly engaged.

Overall I'm completely hooked, your descriptors are wonderful and the story is compelling and, well I just can't wait till you update! I know I should leave so constructive critisism and I really did look for things you could change! but... well, I didn't really find anything. You're such a gifted writer! keep going and goodluck with the challenge!


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