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Review:Singularity says:
Hey there :) I'm glad to see the start of your story up. This is a really interesting first chapter. I think you are setting up your story well.

Harry and the others seem pretty well in character so far. I appreciate that you've included Ginny, but haven't made her and Harry an instant couple. They've got some things to work through, I think.

I noticed a couple of typos and errors of that nature, nothing too major or jarring. I don't know if you have a beta, but if not, you might consider getting one. They are super helpful.

Thanks again for the nice shout-out in your acknowledgements. I really appreciate it. This story is quite a bit different than what I usually read. (What can I say, I love me some fluff :)) The title alone points to the darkness in the story, but I'll definitely stick with it.

Best of luck with your writing!
~Singularity

Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful review! I am glad you believe the characters are true to form. Especially since this is my first attempt at writing.

My wife is my initial beta, but I will look for one on the forums.

Your story "Breathe" inspired me to write this so I will always recommend your work. Besides, you are a wonderful storyteller and I really like your work.

This story is meant to be dark. I am glad you are willing to stick with it, that means a lot. I like fluff too :)

Thanks again.

UH60TI

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