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Review:Mottsnave says:
Hi, I'm back!

Well, it looks like house prejudice, particularly against Slytherin, is alive and well in post-war Hogwarts! I think you picked up on the hint of the Epilogue in canon and ran with it. I'm always very interested in seeing how different authors deal with this issue in a post-war world, so now I'm even more intrigued.

I'm also intrigued by your OC Angela. She seems very deliberate and reasoning, which I like, but also very reluctant to be involved, which means she will probably be sucked into the plot against her will, as we can already see happening here. Her gift really does seem like a double-edged sword.

Again, I think you are using suspense well by giving us the course of events in bits and pieces and letting us put them together.

Mottsnave

Author's Response: Yes, I believe there is still a stigma, although Al may be a little too sensitive to it ;)

Angela will be pulled out of her comfort zone, for sure. Al's good that way. Once he decides he's going to figure something (or someone) out, he can be pretty determined so it should prove an interesting battle of wills.

Yay for keeping up the suspense!

Thanks again for the review.
~ a very appreciative Ty


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