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Review:Debra20 says:
This was a real feast for all the senses to read. I loved it so much! Your descriptions are incredibly vivid. You have the talent of carrying the reader to the scene of the action and allow him to watch everything that happens with incredible clarity.

It was so much fun to read about Snape and his biscuits. It really offered something different from what we usually read about him. Knowing that he has some sweet pleasures he indulges made him more human, more appealing as a character. He is my favourite character so I can honestly say that you portrayed him very well. It felt strange to see him awarding points to Gryffindor but taking into account the whole story theme it felt right in character (and I must congratulate you on the idea of making Hermione offer him the biscuits!). Excellent piece!

Author's Response: Thank you so much -blush- Descriptions are something I try to do well enough to paint a picture for the reader yet still allow imagination to take hold. So thank you for that.

To be honest, I had no idea what I was doing or where I was going with this when I was writing. As you know from the summary and author's notes it was for a challenge. Using Snape as the character was just a sleep deprived impulse I suppose. It does feel weird seeing him reward points to Gryffindor! But he had no witnesses around him, so who would know? ;)

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