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Review:Atomic says:
Hey again!

I'm not really a Cho fan, but I'm absolutely loving your story. It's so well written! Your descriptions are just so lovely they make me jealous. You are great at adding in beautiful details that really help the story.

The dialogue was pretty good. The "drunk" dialogue didn't really seem any different than the normal dialogue, but your descriptions made up for it. Otherwise it was all very good.

The flow was very nicely done this time. Your transitions are flawless.

The characterization also definitely improved in this chapter. Cho felt a bit more cannon, and you hit Hannah right on the spot!!

Great job!

Author's Response: Wow, I converted a non-Cho fan? :D My goals for the story have been accomplished!

They aren't THAT drunk, just somewhat giddy (except for Hannah, who kind of rambles on), so that would probably explain the lack of drunken dialogue. :)

Thank you so much! I'm glad Cho felt canon and that Hannah seemed to be accurate.


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