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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
I liked Snape's initial distrust of Hermione and her phials, but then when he was dying he threw caution to the wind and tried it anyway. If you're dying anyway, what would it hurt to try, right?

Of course she got caught though I'm curious about how all of this works with Snape being alive though he was dead and how things have changed since she changed the past. I'm glad you still had her go to Azkaban. I think it makes it more realistic. She did break the law and change the past so she should be punished for it. I wonder how she'll take Azkaban.

Interesting how Snape is conflicted with his feelings for her - anger at her sacrificing her life for his but compassionate enough to prevent her from spending years in Azkaban.

You get a sort of glimpse at the start of what could potentially be a friendship between them...especially since Hermione will be confined to Hogwarts for a year.

Spelling and grammar were pretty good too and I think the story flowed very well.

As I stated in my review thread, I will only review the first four chapters. School is starting on Monday too so I'm sorry but I don't think I'll have time to continue reading your story even if you re-requested. Good luck with the rest of your story and I hope you find more Sevmione shippers to enjoy your fic!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I understand about school, and I'm not worried about the Sevmione fandom... there are a lot of us lol. *HUGS*

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