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Review:macadamia says:
Hey. macadamianwonders with your requested review. (Sorry I took awhile to get to this.)

Before I say anything, I have to say that I love your title. It's perfect for the story. :)

So, you were concerned with your portrayal of Ron and George. I thought it was beautifully done. The way Ron seemed so hardened and George so broken was so...gah, I don't even know how to describe it. It was just perfect.

I also thought your descriptions were very nice. They brought out that depressing post-war atmosphere which thoroughly saddened me. The contrast of the title with this misery is probably why it's so effective (and why I love the title so much).

There were, however, a few grammar mistakes, mostly in the beginning. And maybe a few words that felt a little off. But they aren't huge errors that detract from the story itself. I guess I'm just picky. ;)
If you would like me to point them out I'd be happy to.

Other than that, great work. I'm excited to see where this will go.

Author's Response: Don't worry about it! I know getting around to reviews takes time :)

I'm glad you like the title. I tend to have trouble with them :3

I'm very glad that Ron and George came across so wonderfully! The Weasleys are probably some of the hardest characters to write, since we know them so well in canon.

Thank you so much for the review! Have a good day :)

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