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Review:ohtasha says:
I'm enjoying this story so far; I haven't seen a plot-line like this, which is definitely a good thing, and I like how you haven't made Hannah into a stereotypical Hufflepuff or made her immediately forget about her old friends as she gets swept up at the Centre.

The writing feels a little unpolished sometimes but it improves as the chapters go on, so please continue! I'm looking forward to the climax of this.

Author's Response: Thank you - I'm pretty sure it's a fairly original plotline. Not sure exactly what a 'stereotypical Hufflepuff' is but I guess that's a compliment?

I'd...yeah, disagree with that. I think the writing certainly deteriorates within this story - unlike most of my others - to the point where I can't even bring myself to reread chapters 9-13. Good to know someone else's opinion though.

Thank you for the review :) I'm not sure there'll be a 'climax' as such, though, as a warning.

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