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Review:argetlam shadeslayer says:
Wow! Scorpius is such a...would you call him a badass? Or maybe an onion? Because that's kind of what he is, a badass onion. You know, with...layers. And stuff. Anyway. I really, really loved this chapter. Reading it was a lot like splitting a Mars bar with your best friend - it's a cross between sharing a secret and going, "Whoa, I didn't know you could eat chocolate like that, you beast!" If that makes any sense, I mean. In my head, that correlates to Pippa and Scorpius - his outburst was so unexpected, but he's so lovable and sunny that I feel a bit like a proud mother wanting to give him a standing ovation for telling off Rose. Your characters are so real and snarky, that it really is a joy to read this story and fall into it. Well done! You rule. (:

Author's Response: A badass onion has to be my favourite way someone has ever described Scorpius, in well, ever. He does have layers! He may be a little slow at times, but his heart is in the right place and that's what I like so much about him. I just love the way you word things! It has me smiling. Yes, it's the start of Pippa's relationship forming with Scorpius as she hasn't allowed herself to even give him the time of the day before. He accepted that before but now he won't. Exactly! He won't let anyone touch his family. I'm so glad you think that! They're pretty special to me so I'm so glad you are enjoy reading about them! Thanks so much for the nice review, it's made my day. xxx

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