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Review:peppersweet says:
GUBBY, I WILL BEGIN WITH A BANG BY TELLING YOU THROUGH THE MEDIUM OF CAPSLOCK THAT THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST SHORT STORIES I'VE EVER READ EVER.

And now I will stop my rabid flailing and actually make some coherent comments.

The atmosphere - fairytale through and through! And I don't mean anaemic, fluffy modern disney fare - I mean, like, hardcore old stories that have been passed down through the centuries. It reminds me, in a way, of Angela Carter, and that can't hurt seeing as she's one of my favourite authors.

The backstory you give here is very succinct and dark, so dark! That opening paragraph is perfect. It draws you right in, and I can't even explain why. I'm just sitting here rereading and rereading, trying to think of something deep and mind-blowing to say but, no, nothing. It's just epic.

Something that just struck me was how flexible you are as an author. I'm reading this and thinking '...as if she wrote confec too!'. That's just, well, wow. ♥

'And when more and more houses were offered to the bloodthirsty gods of warfare, and more and more grinning serpent-skulls watched their prolonged and painful deaths, he brought his daughters back to the palace and waited for the sky to rain Camelotís ashes.' oh. my. god. this line. THIS LINE.

dude, maurice is creepy. I wish I had something more insightful to say but...dude, he's creepy. And onwards to chapter two...

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