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Review:Ancient One says:
This is really very well constructed, and in most places adheres to the spirit and "feel" of the books well. The flow of ideas is quite good, as is the pace. I agree with the first review that some pretext needs to be given to fill the reader in on background from previous story lines, such as the prophecy. This is, after all, the opening chapter of a new work. One other thing I noticed, but you will need to go back to the other books to check, is that the "speaking style" in the letters does not convey the personalities of the writers strongly. I'm not sure the dialogue from Dumbledore, Ron, and Hermione does this routinely in the books, but you should check.

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