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Review:ruby_slippers says:
I can't believe i didn't realise you had updated! I was seriously going to re-read your last chapter to pass the time (aka procrastinate) and it wasn't until i was a paragraph in that i stopped and thought hold up ... im not remembering this ... que light bulb of realisation and excitement.
Quick note: 4th paragraph 2nd sentance "Or gum stuck in the bottom of Rose's show" possibly meaning shoe? Scorpius! I was wandering if he was going to make an appearance. I like him and Rose and the lack of romance there it's nice that Ron's warning didn't lead to a forbiden trist but instead a best friend.
Heathrow airport? Very cute. Got me a little excited coz i'm going there for the first time in November with a mate! Not going to lie i may now be looking for a mysterius couple people watching at the arivals gate haha! Love how Gorgeous is nervous and just kinda talks and then realises what he's said "heard it as soon as i said it. Pure cheese on toast. I am the biggest twat in the world." It was pure cheese but Lucy is the right girl for that and his embarrassed admission of it in the next breath seemed real to me (quite humerous!).
While this chapter didn't seem quite as smooth as your others it was still a joy to read and i thank you muchly for it!

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