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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
One little typo (I think) I caught- "There are countless ways to tell this story, but only one can make sense of the events which occurred during the winter excavation season of 1923-1923." I think you mean 1923-1924 ;)

I absolutely love Helen's character. It's great to see a Pureblood who can stick up for herself. For a first chapter, I already feel like I know quite a bit about her character, which is definitely an accomplishment. And with your reputation, I'm not at all worried that she'll be one-dimensional :P

I have to comment on your dialogue. I think it's something that I often see overlooked in fics, but you clearly paid attention to it. I can tell, just by the way the characters speak, that this is some rich pure blood family not living in today's time period. And it's those small details that make your story that much better.

Another amazing chapter. You've definitely earned your reputation on this site!
-Naida

Author's Response: Thanks! I got to that typo right away - one of those silly things that I missed while editing.

It's wonderful that you like Helen! She's one of my insaner creations, and it always means a lot when readers compliment her. (By insane, I mean that she leans toward Mary Sue in many aspects, but I try to counteract these where I can.) At times, she's a challenge to handle, especially because, with the first person narrative, the story is focused on her all of the time. I have my fingers crossed that she'll continue to remain satisfactory.

Thank you very much for the lovely compliments! Wow, I'm speechless with that last one. The whole thought of having a reputation is frightening. *hides*

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