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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
Wow.

I've been meaning to come and look at your stories for ages, since everyone seems to love them, and now that I'm here, this definitely did not disappoint.

I'm in awe at the way you write. It's the perfect blend of description and simple sentences, of dialogue and actions. Seriously, this reads better than half the books out there today. And I can't comment much on plot based on a prologue alone, but it certainly seems to have a much better plot than half of the novels too. It's not fair to be THIS good at both writing and graphics :P

Being interested in mythology itself, and especially Egyptian mythology, this really appealed to me. And for fanfiction, this is so different. (And I mean that in an entirely good way) It has a basis in history, and the only other historical type fics I've read have been set in WWI/II eras, so I'm loving that this is so different. And I'm really interested to see how you use the Egyptian magic!

This has to be one of the best prologues I've ever seen. I wish I could be more constructive in my review, but everything in this was so flawless, it was impossible for me to find anything to critique :P Excellent!
-Naida

Author's Response: Oh wow, it's shocking to hear that people have talked about my stories in that way, but it's great that you came to read something of mine, and even better that you enjoyed it, or at least this prologue. I'll warn you that it's different from the rest of the story, though the information from it crops up throughout - it was great to help me think through how the ancient Egyptians would have used magic. It's interesting to explore a very different magical culture. :)

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing this prologue, and I hope that you enjoy the rest of the story! ^_^

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