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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Hey there! Me again. :]

Well, this chapter was very long, haha. But I liked it quite a bit. I think it really kicks the plot off well.

I loved the characterization that you put in for all the Marauders, as well as Andy and Lily. It definitely seems like they're real people which is very important.

I'd still like to see some more descriptions. For instance, I wasn't even sure we were in the Gryffindor common room when Lily and Andy are writing their essays together. Until Andy was leaving, I thought they were in the library...

Good job on plot. I think you have a really solid story and I'm sure you're going to keep up the good work!

Well done!

--Emily (DarkRose)

Author's Response: Uh-oh, if you think this one is long... I'll keep an eye on the length from now on though - don't want to tire you all out ;)

These reviews have been hugely helpful; thank you! And I'll be sure to pay more attention to description (it's been pointed out to me a few times now that I tend to neglect that..) :D

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