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Review:Anonymous Prowler says:
That was really sweet! Good job.
The only problem I have is that you keep switching from second person to first person and back. That was a bit confusing and annoying.
You were much more successful keeping it in present tense.
I really like this little oneshot! Keep up the good writing.

Author's Response: I have had a beta reader go over the story for me and correct all those 1st person and 2nd person things. I'm really happy that you enjoyed the story and thanks for reviewing

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