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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
First review is MINE!

Beautiful job as always! Victorie in this, is a total word I cant use because it's not 12+ :P I actually really like her this way. She's sweet and happy in a lot of stories, but with a part werewolf for a father and an arrogant French woman for a mother, I think she'd be more likely to act this way.

Pfft, you have to ASK if I ship Taven?! It's one of my OTPs! I love the two of them together.

Favorite is probably Nydia. Would love to see more of her! Least favorite at the moment is Victorie. I want to just punch her right now, or something worse. :evilgrin:

I'm excited to know more of the Fire Eater secrets! And of course, see Auxilary again, as well as Vanessa. What do I think will happen? No clue. What do I hope to happen? The Fire Eaters attack Teddy and Victorie's wedding and everyone gets away unscathed except for Victorie who DIES. (If you can't tell, I REALLY hate her :P)

A few errors, but nothing huge to worry about :)

Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I just sent you chapter 7 to beta, so I'll hopefully be back in a few hours to fix chapter 1!

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