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Review:taylorj828 says:
Hi there, taylorj828 with your requested review!

Very interesting piece, reads much more like prose, like art, than general fanfiction. It has a mystery about it, a question it seems to be asking that's just beyond reach, not boldly and blandly stated. Giving the reader something to look for and think about.

A few small typos, I think just at the beginning with that/than for example. Otherwise, I though you constructed it well. It's interested that there are no characters named at all, and of course no dialogue. Yet you still tell a story, not only that, but provoke thoughts and responses in the reader.

Sorry that this review is a bit short, but the piece is a bit short too, so I'm not sure what else I can say! I think you did a good job of getting us into the mind of a character we probably don't often visit in fanfiction, and you did it in a different kind of style, with a different kind of view. Overall, well done! (o:

Author's Response: Thank you for the review :) I'm currently going through all of my stories, editing them and correcting typos, so thank you for pointing that out...
Ada/BB4L


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