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Review:Leela says:
I remember reading the first few chapters of this story and really liking it. I should've checked up on it more often. I was so surprised it had 18 chapters already!

It's really good. I like it a lot!
I love that Lily's dancing. Dancing is so fascinating and I like how you put it into your story.

I noticed a lot of spelling errors/typos. And at times I'm like 'Whaaat? I didn't get it'. For example, when Al and James went to Hogwarts because Lily got together with Lysander. That scene was a little confusing, you didn't really write down properly what was going on. Or at least, I get the feeling that you rush through some parts of your story.

But apart from that I really like this. I'd love to know more about Lysander, actually. He seems so nice and like a genuinely good guy.
I like how you developed Lily, her character. She's great.

Author's Response: It's a shame, becuase I'm such a horrible person when it comes to people's spelling and grammer and even just their writing, but I hardly notice when it's me.
I'm trying to get better, honest! xD
Thanks for the review, glad you're enjoying the story despite all the mistakes. When it's done, I'll go back and edit the chapters when I need the procrastination :)

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