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Review:thelovinspoonful says:
You know, I usually avoid D/H like the plague, but this was wonderfully well written. The flashbacks were cohesive, and at the same time, distant enough that it seems quite real that Hermione is remembering these little flashes as she's making her way down the aisle with her father. Ron's a doll - perfect, really - because the way you've written him is just about as IC as it gets. The nerd in me loved Hermione's dad's nervous crack about her teeth (though I wonder why he wasn't so concerned when he shipped her off to Hogwarts with buckteeth, I guess hindsight is 20/20). And Draco, while not the canon Draco we know, is quite believable. (Though it would be nice to know his motivation for change, but I guess a church aisle is only so long, and this story's about Hermione anyway.) The romantic sap in me loved the ending, and its build up. Finally, your imagery and tone are fantastic and meloncholy without being all "slit my wrist" angsty. My favorite line, by far was perhaps: "The silence rang in her ears. His absence more damning than had he been standing there in front of her telling her he didnít love her." Gorgeous little fic!

Author's Response: Wow. I don't even know how you came across this story if you're such a DHr-avoider! :)

Very happy that the flashbacks are not out of place and that they go with the flow.

Though I write Dramione, I definitely pay my respects to Romione and the true Ron character. I can't ever write him as a bad person!

Hee hee, I'm glad you got a kick out of the dentist thing. That seemed like a total dad thing to say! Yeah, agreed on buckteeth thing...oh well.

I did end up writing a sequel to this one so you could check it out *cough, cough* not like I'm looking for more reviews or anything.

Thank you so much for your whole review!!


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