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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Why hello there! This is DarkRose from the forums, here with your review!

Well, first off: I think you have wonderful characterization. Your OCs are very solid which is great. And the canon characters all seem very believable.

The plot seems like it will be very interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next. One thing that I always remind Marauder-era writers of is this: DON'T FORGET PETER. I know, it seems simple. But if you're going to have the Marauders in a story, you have to have all of them and you have to give them all equal credit, INCLUDING Peter. Bummer, I know. :]

I think a few more descriptions might be really helpful in fleshing out your story. For instance: we don't even know what Andy looks like...which isn't great.

Good job on most things, though. I can't really say I have anything to complain about. :]

On to chapter two!

--Emily

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the offer, and for the review, and for your comments - especially for reminding me of Peter's existence ;) Never fear, Peter will be included as much as the other Marauders! And I'll work on description; that's been pointed out to me a couple times now. (:

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