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Review:Blaise Zabinis Fiancee says:
I think that this was my most favorite chapter thus far. I really like all the chapters with action in them, primarily because when I read I imagine everything in my head as it happens, almost like I'm directing a movie or something, but also because I suck at writing them myself. I understand now the connection of Kali now, how she's sort of a part of Harry (because of the blood thing, right?) and I think that she might be a part of Severus as well, correct? Because of that time when he needed blood to do the tracking spell on Harry and he tried to get it off of Kali but instead she bit him?

I LOVE Vishnu. He is an awesome friend, even when he doesn't like doing so...

Once again, you really did capture Harry's personality I think, in full stubborn, bull-headed, impulsive, angriness. You also had to put a lot of thought into how to dispose of-- or not dispose of-- Voldemort this time, didn't you? Not many would have thought of a love-filled Avada Kedavra in the first place, let alone remembered when Dumbledore claimed that there were worse things than death. You must be studying those books or something. The use of the Horcrux, or Crux Horridi was interesting as well, changing them only slightly. I like how you've taken some concepts, even some of the already-explained ones, and change them up a little. It sort of keeps us readers from being totally stuck in JKR's universe and makes it a little bit yours. I think that's part of the reason why I like this one so much. I dunno. I can't wait to finish so that I can start on Resolution!

~Kiri

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