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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
It has taken me awhile to read this chapter because when I saw the word count I went 'woah!' I'm insanely jealous, I wish I could write something as long as this chapter and make it flow as wonderfully.

Ooo! I got a little chill just now. I'm up to the part where Draco eyes her with 'such intensity' that she might explode. I actually really felt that!

Holy smokes! I didn't see that coming actually, you think I would you know. I didn't actually expect Draco to have his wand in his hand. I mean I know he's not stupid but he is a hormonal teenage boy. They tend to have one-track minds when snogging.

The paternity spell was a very good idea! I find that very clever! It sort of creeped me out though but I still think it's very cool.

The Seer thing threw me off BUT WHO CARES! BECAUSE (let me stop writing in caps but I’m trying to make a point) because that...MrsJaydeMalfoy was what I have been waiting for from you all along! There was passion, there was emotion. I mean I've felt the other chapters as well but this, this was just one long piece that worked perfectly. It pretty much put together what I had been expecting and wanting all along. It was wonderful.

Author's Response: Awww! Thank you SO MUCH!! That's got to be one of the best reviews I've ever gotten!! *Squeals with review fangirl joy* :-D I was really concerned about how this chapter would come across, so it's really gratifying to know that it's been received SO well!

Aww, I'm really glad you thought this flowed wonderfully! And that I conveyed the emotions well enough that you could actually feel them! This was meant to be an emotionally-packed chapter. Haha; yeah, the paternity spell was kind of creepy, wasn't it? But I had to have SOME way for him to know for SURE who's baby it was.

As for the seer bit, I felt like I needed to add SOMETHING in there to explain why two people who haven't really even dated would be talking about marriage (other than the baby, of course). I didn't want the 'engagement' to seem like it was ONLY because of the baby... and I really couldn't think of anything else that would make two teenagers start talking about marriage so suddenly unless they KNEW they were meant for each other.

I'm really glad that this chapter put together everything you'd been expecting and wanting to happen, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you SO MUCH for your absolutely amazing review, dear! *hugs*

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