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Review:Snapdragons says:
Percy happens to be one of my favorite characters, because I think he's really interesting, and I've always wanted to read something about him during this time period. I liked how you likened him to the prodigal son - in fact, that was what I wrote my blog entry on for the house cup! :P heh. But it's quite fitting.

"Go forth and set the world on fire." That's a really beautiful quote there, and it's one that I really love. I think it fits really nicely, too. ^-^

Your Percy is perfectly characterized. He felt real. He was ashamed of what he was doing, but at the same time, felt trapped. Yet he missed the Weasleys, and you could tell that, and I was glad about that.

"...he had made the unfortunate choice of building his house upon sand..." I just really enjoyed the imagery in this. "'Better benefits, sir?' was the dry response Percy wanted to give" just made me laugh. :D Heh. He's not completely humorless after all! :P

I think you handled the issue of religion tactfully and very well overall. You weren't forcing it down anyone's throat: it was just one character's wondering and thinking. I could see how Percy might want to find some sort of comfort in his life, and religion might be a way that he could find that. I also like the tie-in with his middle name! :) I had to do a project on St. Ignatius back in elementary school, haha.

A great job! This was really compelling to read and I'm very excited to read the rest. Wonderful work! :)

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